I apologize for the formatting towards the end, the text box was not cooperating with me at all! Oh and the bold text in the middle of a paragraph, not by someone's name is Athena's thoughts. Please comment and let me know what you think!
Athena: What the heck is this thing?
Athena: I wonder what will happen if I kick it...
Suddenly a bright blue light appeared, sending Athena stumbling a few inches back. What the...?
Athena: Who the heck are you?
Blue Hair Guy: My name is Emit Relevart. Who are you?
He looked around, obviously confused about his surroundings.
Emit: This is not Riverview...
At the utterance of "Riverview" Athena began to laugh hysterically. She was holding onto her sides.
Athena: You think you're in Riverview? You do realize that place doesn't actually exist right? Next you're going to tell me that you're coming from Sunset Valley.
He shifted on his feet, avoiding eye contact with the pink haired female. It suddenly became clear to him where he was. Lunar Lakes, a completely different world. It was taught in the futuristic history books that when a space exploration team crash landed on the alien planet, they had no choice but to create their own civilization. People became so comfortable that they stopped all research on how to get back to the original towns. They all became legends, rumored towns. He could see it in Athena's demeanor that she knew only of Lunar Lakes.
Athena: You're not actually from Sunset Valley are you? I think I have to call the cops...
Emit: No need for law enforcement. I come in peace. I am from the future and it looks like my time portal malfunctioned. Do you think you can help me find some power cells? I think they went flying from my pocket after I landed.
Athena was hesitant at first but a quick walk around her house revealed that power cells were indeed a real thing and were scattered all around her yard. She handed the power cells to the mysterious time traveler.
Emit: Thank you. I am sorry for having interrupted you. I will be heading back now.
He turned to go back to portal when Athena had a crazy idea. Why don't I go with him? The worst that could happen is that this guy is a whack job and the portal doesn't actually work. She had high hopes though because she knew by the way Emit dressed, he was not from Lunar Lakes. As Emit started up the portal, Athena slowly crept toward it. As a blue light began to form, Athena rushed in along with Emit.
Athena felt her body tingle and within seconds she landed hard on the floor.
Athena: Ouch!
Emit: Why would you do that!?
Athena: You didn't think I was just going to sit back and watch you walk through a time machine did you? Oh my...we really are in the future!
She peered over the ledge of the building and saw hover cars, floating skateboards and...
Athena: ROBOTS? What!?
Emit: -sigh- They're plumbots. You need to go back now though, you can't be here.
Athena: Why not, will I change the future or something?
Emit: You can change the past, it could be deadly.
Athena: Really? Do you think I can reverse something that happened in the past by changing the future? That doesn't make sense though, I thought the past changed the future not the other way around.
Emit: Its complicated. You don't know what danger you're putting yourself in, you have to go back now.
Athena: I'm not going back without exploring the future.
Emit: Alright, if I let you explore will you go back to your time?
Athena: Uhh...sure. Yeah.
Emit: -sigh- You have only one day in the future. You're leaving tonight, understand?
Athena:Yes, sir!
Awesome! I love stories with ITF! :) Everything looks ok except you definitely have some spacing issues. I'm not sure how to tell you to fix it, though, as I do not have that in my Blogger story. Hmmm...
ReplyDeleteOnly 1 day, huh? She could creates lots of havoc in one day. LOL! :)
I think its because I tried to line up the text under the person's name, I'm working on that though! Thanks for reading!
DeleteI got halfway through this chapter and texted my boyfriend to get ITF for me. Lol. I had thought it was the EP that interested me the least, but it looks fun to play around with.
ReplyDeleteI love this start, I've kind of shared the previous commenters thoughts on ITF but I many have to reconsider. I'll bet she can get plenty down in a day...can't wait to see what!
ReplyDeleteLol fun start! She seems to be a very stubborn gal hehehe looking forward to her time in Oasis Landing, and to find out what Emit meant!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for reading! :)
DeleteJust started reading your legacy. It's is an interesting start, not sure I would just follow a stranger into a machine that may or may not take me to the future. Looking forward to see what happens from her time there. She could create a quite a few time paradoxes.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading! Athena is just like "what could possibly go wrong?"
DeleteHey... thought I'd check this one out since I read that announcement on Wild Flower. XD
ReplyDeleteUh oh, she's messing with the timey-wimey stuff... and with her fiery attitude on life, hehe, "what will happen if I kick this unknown object" LOL, she could cause a lot of trouble for herself... and possibly the world. o.O
Hey! Thanks for checking this out! I hope to get Wild Flower up and running soon because I already miss playing with that save.
DeleteI've been meaning to start your story and I finally did it. I don't have the future expansion pack so I'm very interested in where this is going :3 also Athena is an awesome name.
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